Any bored Japanese reading people out there?

[tephra]

I asked someone that was volunteering to translate Japanese knitting patterns about this and I've tried swatching it based on what they said the pattern says... but it's not working very well. So if anyone reads Japanese and is really bored I'd appreciate a second (or third, or fourth) opinion.



The pattern this is from has a very wide, very flat, cable down the front (it is a generous third of the front, easily) and the way the person translated the instructions pulls in the cable far too much in my swatch, no matter how I "massage" it to work.